More updates on Lucifer's Odyssey

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Chapters revised today: Lucifer's Odyssey (10)
Happiness with revisions: 8/10
Chapters left to revise in this pass: Lucifer's Odyssey (11)

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The 10th chapter is a bit long at 36 pages now, but the changes in flow should help - I hope. I feel really good about the changes I made to the grumpy old architect. He won't be anyone's favorite character, but he should be at least more interesting.

In additional news, I'm talking with a talented artist about cover art. I think everyone is going to be pleasantly surprised with the results once we get started. He seems interested, and his work seems right up my alley.