So, I've redrafted the first chapter and have been working closely with my editor throughout the process. I think he has done a fantastic job, but I'm also a bit biased.
To those who have read my old first chapter (or tried to) or any new visitors to the blog, how do you feel about the current pacing, point of view, character development, etc.? Are Derek and I on the right track?
Lucifer's Odyssey - Chapter 1